First, I'm good at art. Also I like car. It means that i want to be a car designer. About four years ago, I don't know about car. However my father was interested about car. Then I graduated elementary school, I'm getting more interesting about car. I'm sure that I'll be a great car designer like Michael Mauer. He works on Porsche.
Second, as i like car, I go to watch Formula1 which hold in Yeongam-gun every years. In last year I have met Big Bang in K-pop concert that held in F1. It was my first opportunity to meet K-pop star. Their singing caught my eyes.
Third, I have been to Jeju. It is famous for orange,Dolhareubang. Also people often call Jeju 'Three things of island. This is because there are lots of girls,rocks,wind.
How do you do these days? Matt~
ReplyDeleteReading your blog, i feel your effort in the camp^^ . It's not perfect but describes well you start to develop your self.
"Do your best".
See you tomorrow~
It's interesting to find out you love cars. Do you play any racing video games? I like the kind where you earn money and get to upgrade cars, and there's one on my iPad called "Real Racing."
ReplyDeleteAs for your grammar, you can work on some basic things, such as always using a capital "I" and never a lower case "i" when you write about yourself. These are simple mistakes you don't have to make, and your writing will look much more attractive if it looks like you took some time to write carefully.
Corrections you can make:
Also I like car(s). It means that i(I) want to be a car designer. About four years ago, I don't (didn't) know about car(s). However(,) my father was interested (in) car(s).
(When) I graduated elementary school, (I) (became) more (interested) (in) car(s).
I'm sure that I'll be a great car designer like Michael Mauer. He works (for) Porsche.
Please make these corrections above in your post!