Thursday, December 29, 2011
Chain writing: France is a place where..
France is a place where it is good for sightseeing. there are wonderful places to travel all over the world. However, I think the France is the most beautiful area. For example, there is a city named Paris. It is famous for Eiffel Tower and probably everyone in the world knows it. Also, France is famous for Millau Bridge which is the tallest in the world. Its height is about 400 meters long. Moreover France is famous for Pebble Beach. It has blue, clear water. In addition, as you can guess from the name of the beach, there are many pebbles there. Many people visit Pebble Beach. It is in Riviera.
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A essay about Paris? This one definitely needs more, and might not be as easy to use for metafiction as some of the others. But you could embed it as a speech made be someone who had been there etc.
ReplyDeleteSome problems with grammar - articles such as "the."
Captial T - There are wonderful places
Delete "the" - However, I think France
Insert "the" - It is famous for THE Eiffel Tower..
Clean up some of the sloppy mistakes, and try and finish the essay with a strong last paragraph.